Much better than the original, too. Like the blade.
The face looks fine. Maybe it's not entirely correct.... the perspective is quite awkward which makes it hard to tell. But you really gotta zoom it and stare at it for a while to start wondering if anything is amiss. All in all it looks good to me, and it's almost not in the manga style, which I won't hide that I like Cheerz! You asked
Awesome. The face looks good, but I do think that the angle of her head is a bit extreme. It also seems as though her neck is too far back where it connects to her head. Looks like you could pull the neck forward and mesh it more with the underside of her jaw. It's a little hard to put my finger on what feels off about it, really, but hopefully I've provided at least some insight.... haha